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tT:ToAN- Alplain's anger

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EDIT: Oh my I gave Rain a BAD NAME^^;

Oh my goatness...its Fanart from my Screen Story Sequel to the movie "The Terminal"! I drew Alplain awhile back but thats when her name was spelt "Alplane" and the plot was still underway. To date Im already 89 pages in on the 12th chapter and nearing the middle of the story. I feel the story has 2 climaxs and Im not sure if thats a good thing or not(this picture is durning the first climax which isnt as important as the final one) I also feel the final climax is too out there and my biggest fear is that it will kinda make no sense with how the story is going so far. I know some of you are probably saying "Post the story and lets try and help you" As much as i would appreciate it my other biggest fear is this idea getting ripped off and sold to Dreamworks and then seeing MY idea being credited to someone else:( Thats why Im not saying TOO Much about the screen story its self.

Probably wondering what that mark is on her neck there. Well,again, I dont want to give too much information away but I dont think it can hurt to say she got branded by a pro war group "The Liberty Rebels"(I did deep reasearch on this, they are NOT A REAL PRO WAR GROUP! THe worst I found was err a local small town band of the name^^;) because she has Liberty Rebel Blood in her family(On her mothers side). Shes being all mad at the leader of the pro war group for well...I cant really tell you that because you would have to read the screen story to understand and well we all know my problem with that is:P

Alplain (C) Kelsey Jackson, you can try and steal my idea but good luck for you don't know anything about it or its main character;)
The Terminal: Tale of Alplain Navorski (C) Kelsey Jackson
The Terminal (C) Dreamworks 2004
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JunkoTsukashima's avatar
Sounds interesting. Really wish I could read it but alas I know why I cannot XD Plus, I've never seen the Terminal although I wish I have, only my mum has seen it. Maybe one of these days you'll get a book published and then I can go "Oh yay! It's that girl I wanna read all the stories from! *buys book* <3" *laughs* Well, more or less.

Very interesting picture, although one little thing I might mention is to try to use the smudge tool a bit more for the rain, it's just a tad blocky. Sorry, I'm not much of an artist to notice these things but you mentioned something about giving rain a bad name so I thought I might try to help you out. ^^;